Right off the bat, I can tell there needs to be a stronger distinction between the sections that cover proper use and those that illustrate IMproper use. As is, I'm visually reading these as the same; you need to make a clear graphic distinction that separates the two drastically different standards of right and wrong.
Right off the bat, I can tell there needs to be a stronger distinction between the sections that cover proper use and those that illustrate IMproper use. As is, I'm visually reading these as the same; you need to make a clear graphic distinction that separates the two drastically different standards of right and wrong.
ReplyDeleteOtherwise, good start.