So I have been posting during what the if ... and I have been crazy busy with other classes and projects due. So I am just going to post some more info on what is posted below.
The front and back of the pamphlet are two different options, which is better? Do you like having some depth in the background or is it distracting? Should it be something else?
Also, the three things I have will be a welcome to menno letter, the pamphlet and a business card. These three things would be included in a folder when a person first visits menno, or at a home show where they would pick up some information.
Does the business card shape look too much like a bean? how would I make it look more like a rock?
Any other input would be great. The letterhead with the welcome to menno letter is pretty plain, just a bunch of text with the rock shape in the red on the top and bottom and menno in the upper left corner of the red block.
I plan on getting some textured paper to print everything on, so the color of the tan/background might change slightly.
Any other input would be appreciated. I hope to have some changes before monday, but I did not/ do not have the time before 8 pm tonight ... but things have changed since most people have last seen them.
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Content is good, but I don't think the illustrated stones are giving you enough visual impact– the shapes aren't bold enough and/or the text isn't subtle enough. One of the two has to shift. As a total fresh look at the stones, I wonder if there is a place to incorporate photography of 'stacked zen rocks' (google it) with your wordmark. Since the letterforms are well developed, this might help you have some stronger imagery and give you more options for compositional arrangements. (As an aside: be sure to spellcheck your body copy and change double spaces to single).
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